Mixing & Mastering with Music Production Suite 8

Anatoliy

Greetings!

My first attempt to mix and master with Music Production Suite 8 kind of failed. Track sounds not loud, bright and crispy as I expected, but like sounds from another room. Can you guys please listen and push me to the right direction to become better with mixing and mastering. What in the track "pokes an ear" the most? What should be fixed in the firs place (and how)?

Thanks in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/anatoliy-viktorovich-557939473/yavr-yavorina?si=33e00dadfe8148b4aa8247bda125a0ab&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Anatoliy

oh man…

after I created my second attempt and compared it to the first I was able to hear how bad was my bass sound in the first one ) the second is better, but still far away from what it should be.

Its there some kind of a "school" or "academy" somewhere here where noobs can get fundamental knowledge?

https://soundcloud.com/anatoliy-viktorovich-557939473/yavr-yavorina-2?si=5dfafc63a42940f89e2b54aeb159b5ee&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing