My second piece of music… any comment to help me?
I arrive today with my second song. I tried my best to follow your comments on my first one. I also tried to make something much easier. As a very beginner, I tried to make a simple piece of music… at the level of my knowledge.
I also took care about the rythm and the volume of each piece.
Would you have any comment? Any advice? Everything is good to take.
Thank you to all of you 🙏♥️✨
Okay from the volume, Sindri.
Please give it a bit more spatials using delay and reverb with variations on each instrument.
The outro is IMHO too long.
Thanks for let us know your music.1
LostInFoundation Member Posts: 1,782 Expert
Different genre but also here nice vibes.
This time just a couple of fast notes:
The drums could benefit of an overall compressor
I can agree with Paule: the “outro” without drums is a little long.It could end at 2:07, unless the song is thought with future vocals on it that could make the outro more variated.
Same thing is valid for the overall variations of the melody: every now and then you put a new element in it, but it would work better with a singed part giving more changes to the total flow.
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