My second piece of music… any comment to help me?

Sindri

Hi everybody,

I arrive today with my second song. I tried my best to follow your comments on my first one. I also tried to make something much easier. As a very beginner, I tried to make a simple piece of music… at the level of my knowledge.

I also took care about the rythm and the volume of each piece.

Would you have any comment? Any advice? Everything is good to take.

Thank you to all of you 🙏♥️✨

https://on.soundcloud.com/7NCc12Ge4Bp7bLys9

Paule

Okay from the volume, Sindri.

Please give it a bit more spatials using delay and reverb with variations on each instrument.

The outro is IMHO too long.

Thanks for let us know your music.

LostInFoundation

Different genre but also here nice vibes.

This time just a couple of fast notes:

The drums could benefit of an overall compressor

I can agree with Paule: the “outro” without drums is a little long.It could end at 2:07, unless the song is thought with future vocals on it that could make the outro more variated.

Same thing is valid for the overall variations of the melody: every now and then you put a new element in it, but it would work better with a singed part giving more changes to the total flow.

Good job

Milos

Use the compression or dynamics for master channel (KiloHearts Dynamics or ST supercharger), just make sure you use dry/wet settings so that you can hear raw and compressed signal at the simultaneously.